11/08/2026
My writing process usually goes something like this...
1. Get ridiculously excited about a shiny new idea.
2. Brainstorm like a genius.
3. Write the entire manuscript in a few sittings while the words are magically flowing.
4. Spend weeks convincing myself every second word is wrong and edit 5,163,745,178,263,54 times ๐
Okay, I exaggerated! This was my 7th or 8th edit... With each edit, I focus on something different:
First, I look at the story as a whole. For this manuscript, I broke it into five sections: scene setting and introducing the problem, three increasingly difficult challenges, and finally the mastery moment.
Next, I revisit my goals and make sure I've actually achieved what I set out to do.
Then I look at the word count, word choice, and whether the language suits my target audience.
After that, I ask myself what can be removed from the text and shown through illustrations instead.
Even though at this point I've probably read the manuscript 100 times, I still do a rhythm check. Originally, I wanted to write in an anapestic rhythm, but I eventually let that idea go. I realised I was forcing the words to fit the meter, and the story was losing its strength. Instead, I aimed for three to five strong beats per line (usually four) with the beats spaced as evenly as possible. That's what's highlighted in this photo.
I also counted the syllables in each line, not because I'm aiming for perfect consistency, but because it helps me spot where I've become too wordy.
Once that's done, I map the manuscript into spreads and think carefully about page turns to build suspense and make sure each page has enough breathing room.
Now, even though I'm calling this manuscript "finished," there are still two lines I want to add where I replaced an entire verse with an illustration.
Once those final tweaks are in, I'll lay the manuscript out on the pages, do one last spelling and grammar check, and then hand it over to some fresh eyes. Because no matter how many times I've read it, there's always something someone else will spot!